The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
The Eiffel Tower, which is located near the Seine river, has been one of the most famous tourist attraction of Paris and France. The Tower's height is 324 meters with the total weight of metal structure is 10100 tonnes. Eiffel tower has two platform for sightseeing. The first one is at 57 meters height while the other is at 115 meters.
Recently, government has a plan to extent the underground facility to attract more tourists as long as local people to visit this place. Overall, there will be five levels for the underground extension. All five floors will be connected by vertical lift at either side of the Tower. Moreover, there will be glass ceiling for people to see the Eiffel Tower from underground.
To be more specific, the first floor of the underground will be the ticker office and access to tower. The second level will be shops and restaurants followed by cinema and museum on the next floor. The last two levels are use for parking.
The details about this have not been finalised yet, and more information will be published in the near future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'platform' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'platforms'.
Suggestion: platforms
...e is 10100 tonnes. Eiffel tower has two platform for sightseeing. The first one is at 57...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...last two levels are use for parking. The details about this have not been finali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73796791444 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40220665521 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2738345865 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8333333333 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149437313475 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617496995371 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036827690551 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894046893125 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029834697508 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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