The picture showa the changes of
The picture depicts the variations of a park from 1980 to still now.
Ovetall,it is plainly viewed that the park had flowers area which is changed to play ground.however, pond and beach have the same locality.
It is explicitly observed that in 1989 the park had 2 gates which elevate now 2 to 4.the park had trees on the northeast and now it has changed to picnic chairs,desks,and barbeque trees.the trees area were in rectanwin 1980 but now it is in the form of circle.the most striking point is that the pond and beach have the same place.there is no change in this locality.
Turning to the next,flowers which were the southwest are now converted into another place which is bush and now it is little small than as it used to be in 1980.next,the flowers which were at the east-south side but there is a play ground.
- Many criminals commit further cre as soon as they released from prison what do you think what are the 56
- Some people think that chip. 11
- Nowadays buy more and more things things which are unnecessary why it so happening 61
- Some people believe that young people should have university education this will 67
- Some people think that children centres provide the best services for children play school age other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better cares for their kids 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... a park from 1980 to still now. Ovetall,it is plainly viewed that the park had flo...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , desks
... and now it has changed to picnic chairs,desks,and barbeque trees.the trees area were ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...nic chairs,desks,and barbeque trees.the trees area were in rectanwin 1980 but now it ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , flowers
...e in this locality. Turning to the next,flowers which were the southwest are now conver...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...small than as it used to be in 1980.next,the flowers which were at the east-south si...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56081081081 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78138016147 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.375208565 43.030603864 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.75 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977911973304 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690977505755 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427084557482 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690977505755 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427084557482 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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