The picture shows the process of making wool Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Given is the diagram delineating how to make woolen products from real sheep’s fleeces. Perceptibly, this is a linear process with multiple steps, commencing with rearing up sheep and culminating with making clothes from wool.
In the initial step, the sheep are fed by a sheep breeder until they have thick wool to be harvested. Following that, they are sheared to take large fleeces for the ensuing cleaning step with water. The subsequent step is when these cleaned fleeces are drawn up moisture by a special dryer and then they are carded by a machine with rollers so as to remove left strings for recycling purposes later and simultaneously keep turfs of wool for the following manufacturing phase. After that, these turfs of wool are stored into the storage before being spun into balls of yarn. Ultimately, the resulting materials are used in knitting or making it to fabric for producing clothes for commercial purposes.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ey are carded by a machine with rollers so as to remove left strings for recycling purpo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llowing manufacturing phase. After that, these turfs of wool are stored into the ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01290322581 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62494239568 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0269261415 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103515063446 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498047664054 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365033708181 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938793106717 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375708171027 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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