Pie Chart

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Pie Chart

The given two pie charts illustrate about retail sector's sales happened online in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Four sectors has been included in both pie charts.

First of all, 2005 was the year when people in Canada spent more than anything on electronics and appliance which was 35% sales. All other sales such as food and beverage, home furnishings and video games were less than 30% in 2005, which were 22%, 25% and 18% to precise respectively.

Second of all, condition of people changed in 2010, only one home furnishings sales were less than 20% and out of other three in video games 23% sales happened. Food and beverage and electronics and appliance sales were 32% and 30% respectively.

On the top of that, 5% sale decreased in five years from 2005 to 2010 in electronics and appliance. Furthermore, people spent their most on online sales in food and beverage in 2010, which was exactly 10% more than 2005, similarly 10% sales decreased in home furnishings and video games became more popular in 2010 that is sales rose 18% to 23%.

To conclude, in 2010 people were more interested in food and video games than buying appliances and furniture for home.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, similarly, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80198019802 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44187402421 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6204673131 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711879126965 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489618139987 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956759329883 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635951259214 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127190251843 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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