The pie chart below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world how the population is distributed.

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The pie chart below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world how the population is distributed.

The three pie chart illustrate information about the funding and consuming of basic amenities by all nations in the globe and how the world population is distributed.

To begin with, first chart indicates that most of the cash has been spent on others two-fifths. Secondly, the data of food (24%) is double as compared to housing(12%) among other basic needs. Furthermore, it is noticed that amount funded for clothes stands at 6% whereas, eople of the world on an average spent less around a fifth.

In addition to this, second pie chart shows that 57% people are living in Asia as it is the highest. Furthermore, Europe and America population is constant(14%). Also, the data of Africa is double(10%) as of others remaining countries(5%).

Finally, the last chart describes that though the population of USA and Europe is 10% less than seven out of ten. Last but not the least, the remaining 40% of resources are used by other countries.

All in all, Asia was maximum those who spent more on basic needs. USA and Europe consumed highest of all the resources.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91758241758 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6310421058 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0401708918 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197823503133 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660548429445 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660345413475 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110363873452 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847006256796 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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