The pie chart below show the area and current population of the seven continent as a percentage of the total. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given pie charts describe the percentage of area of the world and percentage of world population belonging to different continents.
Overall, Asia consist of the maximum percentage of world land area and also contain the more than half of world population. Furthermore, Antarctica is the emptiest continent and Asia is the most congested area of the world.
Although more than 60% of world population live in Asia, it just include less than one third of world land (30%). Likewise, 12 percentage of world population is for Europe which is greater than percentage of world land belong to this continent. Apart from Asia and Europe, for other continent percentage of world area is greater than percentage of world population.
Oceania has the minimum percentage of world land area, and include just 0.5% of world population. In addition Antarctica with about 9% of world land area has not any inhabitant. Africa in both categories is located at the second seat by 13% world population and 20% world land area. South and North America also contain 12 and 16 per cent world land area respectively which is about twice times of their per cent in world population.
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 67
- In many countries school have severe problem with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solution can you suggest? 73
- The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.Summarize the information by selecting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 61
- The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'consists'.
Suggestion: consists
...to different continents. Overall, Asia consist of the maximum percentage of world land...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...clude just 0.5% of world population. In addition Antarctica with about 9% of world land ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of their per cent in world population.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, likewise, second, so, third, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97948717949 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68830471646 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471794871795 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8786317437 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115645877426 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738324503304 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484784089832 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108163844751 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514344800345 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.