The given pie chart illustrates the earnings in the city of London for 1985 and 1995 while the table indicates the total annual salaries between the executives of males and females in the difference of financials sectors.
Overall,there was recorded the highest of total earnings in 1985 while the average annual salaries of all financial sectors,males executives show higher rate than female in 1985.
In 1985,the sector of banking was the highest compared in 1995 followed by Insurance is the second place with compared in 1985 is higher.Then, the commodity trading is the third place is lower than compared in 1995.Then, currency dealing which is higher than by comparing in 1995.The total earnings in that year was $3.335 million.In contrast, over ten years,the total earnings increased over doubled to $6,710 million.
In table chart,the average of earnings of male executives always got higher salaries than female for decade.The amount of females salaries increased almost over triple from 1985 to 1995,although they had less salaries.Then the total salaries rose up significantly between males and females in 1985 to 1995.And the males and females of executives from currency dealing is $30,000 and $28,000 in 1985 increased both of them highly to $ 80,000.
- Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, while others think that the government cannot solve these environmental problems unless individuals make some action.Discuss both views and give your opinion.Give reasons 56
- The pie chart below shows the earning of the City of London for the years 1985 and 1995. These earnings are known as invisible earnings and they showed huge increases in the years studied. The graph shows comparisons between earnings for male and female e 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, then, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79574545846 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.554299352 43.030603864 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.5 112.824112599 236% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 22.9334400587 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31022967822 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204782525225 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578485430612 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204782525225 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578485430612 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.2329268293 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 61.2550243902 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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