The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pies demonstrate the percentage of local children charity program activities in USA in one year.
As can been seen from the charts, the major of revenue sources is donation food while the largest proportion of spending is in program services.
Look at the pies for more detail, donated food accounted for the largest amount of income at approximately 87%, followed by nearly 10% and 2.2% of sources receives from community contributions and program revenue, respectively. Moreover, there is an equality comparable between investment income and government grants at 0.2%.
In addition, the money charity's percentage is expend in program services to closely 96% whereas fundraising and management and general just spend 2.6% and 1.6%.
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 22
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To 73
- An interesting number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development? 56
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Argument 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...ram activities in USA in one year. As can been seen from the charts, the major of reve...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expended'.
Suggestion: expended
...ition, the money charitys percentage is expend in program services to closely 96% wher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43103448276 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89069605153 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1735855225 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118673402257 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671155098791 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808126425433 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810270254438 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832085725191 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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