The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the expenditure and income for a children's charity in the USA in 2016. Overall, it can be seen that, most of its revenue is coming from donated food and similarly, the program services made its most expenditure.

To begin with, donated food is accounted for most of the revenue at 86.6%. Community contributions made 10.4% of the income. Program revenue contributed 2.2%. Investment income and government grants made equal contribution at 0.2%. Other income stands for 0.4%.

On the other hand, program services made 95.8%of its expense. The charity spend only 2.6% for fundraising. For management and general the expenditure was 1.6%. The income was just sufficient to overcome the expenditure.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...s made 95.8%of its expense. The charity spend only 2.6% for fundraising. For manageme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3652173913 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.847079225 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0767612992 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0909090909 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.4545454545 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578020640564 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265527281976 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070100767041 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458525310852 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516744170356 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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