The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information about world population, spending and consumption of resources by each world’s continents is shown in the 3 pie-charts. The figures are given in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that even though population of Asia is a majority, it is not the world’s main resources consumer but USA and Europe. Moreover, the others resource type is by far the highest proportion in the world spending.
To begin with, both USA and Europe are 14% of the world’s population which its sum are 28%; however, they consume 60% of the world’s resources which is the largest consumption rate. Although other countries including Asia, Africa, and others are accounted for 72% of all population, but their resources usages are 40% lower than those of USA and Europe.
Moving to the world’s spending, the resources are used in other activities the most, which make up by far the highest proportion for 40%. In addition, food are next with just under a quarter. The remaining including clothing, housing, and transport are all lower than a fifth ranging from 6% to 18%.
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| 2019-06-22 | pandaree.r | 78 | view |
| 2019-02-09 | Tasbiha | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...jority, it is not the world's main resources consumer but USA and Europe. Moreover, ...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...sumer but USA and Europe. Moreover, the others resource type is by far the highest pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11173184358 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95727617086 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9401246675 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1830041662 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736990865173 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711568967229 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128431311468 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687362058604 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.