The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

The pie chart states data on the spending and consumption of resources with respect to the world population.

The pie chart for world population shows Asia has the largest human residing civilization, i.e. 57% of the globe. However, it would be naïve to overlook on the fact that Asia, is the largest continent, thus, having more land area compared to others.
Europe and America has 14% of the world's population. Africa being at third position consist of 10% of the populations. It can be inferred that other continents such as Australia hols 5% of the world's population.

Secondly, overviewing the consumption of resources USA and Europe contributes 60% alone. Rest all continents contribute 40% all together. Hence, we can inferred that the other 40% of the globe practise more minimalism than USA and Europe. USA and Europe has noticed to have more of "use-and-throw" goods over recycling goods.

Lastly, the world spending chart states, people most commonly spend on other activities, i.e. 40% of the total spending. Food constitutes of about 24% which is equal to transport and clothing combined. Housing constitutes of about 12% of the world spending.

Hence, to recapitulate, Asia being the populated continent, however, USA and Europe, has higerher rate of consumption of resources.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'infer'
Suggestion: infer
...tribute 40% all together. Hence, we can inferred that the other 40% of the globe practis...
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Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...s, i.e. 40% of the total spending. Food constitutes of about 24% which is equal to transport a...
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Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...ransport and clothing combined. Housing constitutes of about 12% of the world spending. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, such as, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33653846154 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14090626408 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7885602656 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2857142857 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231173091429 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806369630174 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111038810213 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138278537257 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128449017999 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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