The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and 2055
The diagrams display the number of citizens staying in Oman and Spain from 2005 to 2055 based on the age. Interestingly though, it is measured in percentage. At first glance, it was evidence that the highest amount of Oman’s populations reached by people having the age more than 60 years old and it has similar result in Spain both of the time.
Moving to a more detailed analysis concerning to the data in Oman, the biggest percentage of inhabitants increased 9% for the age over 60 years old and it has grown in the age of 15-59 years old under one in twenty while the citizents with 0-14 years old dropped 9% from 48% to 37%.
Turning to the Spain’s datas, the upper number achieved by the seniors over 60 years old but it was a decline less than a fifth in 2055 whereas the populations having 15-59 years old gained over two fifths in the last fifty years whilst the age around 0-14 years old fell 2 % in the last years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...4 years old fell 2 % in the last years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42441860465 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3434298803 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.022080794 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.2 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178106432335 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116582979574 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944663432619 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139105722773 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872220169417 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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