The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the three different ages of the populations in Oman and Spain during 2005 and the anticipated figure for 2055.
Overall, it can be seen that 0-14 years and 15-59 years will have soared in their populations in both nations by 2055, whereas the same two countries will witness opposite trends when it comes to 60+ years in 2055.
In terms of Oman, in 2005, there were identical proportions for 0-14 years and 15-59 years with 48% each, compared to over 60 years at 4% only. Despite being close to half, 0-14 years are set to drop significantly to 37% in the end. There is a strong possibility that over 60 years will swell considerably to 57% in 2055, while 15-59 years are set to rise a little to 6% from 4%.
Turning to Spain, 60+ years stood at approximately three-fifths (62%) of the total, which was the highest figure in 2005. On the other hand, 15-59 years came next in the position at 24%, nearly twice as many as 0-14 years at 14%. Having achieved the greatest total in 2005, 15-59 years, however, will have shrunk sharply to 46% by the final term. Likewise, 0-14 years are also predicted to dip (14% to 12%) slightly by 2% in 2055. In contrary, 15-59 years will experience a dramatic growth to finish the period at 42% from 24%.
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Overall, it can be seen that 0-14 years and 15-59 years will have soared in their populations in both nations by 2055, whereas the same two countries will witness opposite trends when it comes to 60+ years in 2055.
seems the green color is not for '15-59 years'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 230 200
No. of Characters: 980 1000
No. of Different Words: 128 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.894 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.261 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.391 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.693 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.451 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...05, there were identical proportions for 0-14 years and 15-59 years with 48% each...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, well, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52608695652 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35249535696 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5655575645 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960662875736 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552951844093 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873947488335 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110041421173 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115160880857 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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