The pie charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Oman and Spain in 2005 and projections for 2055.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart delineates that, how the per cent of population changed from the year 2005 to 2055. The report has been illustrated for Oman and Spain.
In the year 2005, people above the age 60 dominated almost half of the population(48 %) in Oman. While, children below 14 years recorded similar amounts with above 60 people that is, 48 %. The least amount was accounted for the people in the range 15 to 59 years of age(4 %).
As in regards with Spain, trend was completely changed. The people aged between 15 and 59 years old recorded 4 times(24 %) the people with the same age in Oman. Whereas, in the case of 0-14 years old, the amount was 48 per cent. Moreover, for the people above 60 years old the per cent increase was 14 % more compared to that of the Oman people.
For the year 2055, the projections reported that above 60 people will dominate in both the regions. In addition to that, 57 % for Oman and 46% for Spain, respectively. However, the readings for the people aged between 0 to 14 will be approximately 4 times greater for Oman(37 %) than Spain(12 %). The substantial increase will be observed for the people from 15-59 years old. It has been predicted that Spain's 15 to 59 years old population( 6%) will increase 8 times the Oman population(42 %).
Thus, it can be inferred that above 60 years old people dominate for both the regions and also for both the years. However, for both the years, contrast patterns has been observed in regards with 15 to 59 years old people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...inated almost half of the population48 % in Oman. While, children below 14 years ...
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Suggestion: than
...s old the per cent increase was 14 more as compared to that of the Oman people. ...
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Suggestion:
...regards with 15 to 59 years old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40466763738 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447368421053 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6329465168 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.125 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149162815187 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735898145331 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506728744406 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125866808179 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733015945595 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.