The given pie charts illustrates the data about the manufacturing and utilization of the coffee in different regions and also reveals the benefits which goes to the four different sectors.
Overall, it is clear the the maximum coffee produces in South Aferica, and Europe and USA are the highest nations where the coffee consumption is done. While, the delivery sector earned the most profit among all categories.
As can be seen from the first pie chart, 44% of coffee is producing in south Africa. In comparison, Indonasia makes only 22%, and Vietnam and Japan produces approximately 16% and 18% of coffee respectively.
Moving towards to coffee consume, The europe consumed the maximum coffee about 44%. Whereas, 39% utilized by America and rest of the world stood at 12%. Japan is least nation in coffee consumption (8%).
In regard to profit, Delivery sector earned the more then half of profit. Whereas, retailers earned a quarter of the benefit. 10% of profit goes to the exports while, remaining 15% of the profit earned by production sector
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uces approximately 16% and 18% of coffee respectively. Moving towards to coff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, whereas, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61076463015 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4651102965 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274112402144 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982945616315 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544247211009 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14213229388 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402249108529 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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