The pie charts below show the coffee production coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare the production and consumption of coffee by different regions. They also present information on how the profits are distributed according to delivery, retailers, exporters and producers.

Overall, it can be seen that most of the consumption of coffee is in Europe while South Africa is the top producer of coffee. It is also clear that most of the revenue is accounted to delivery while the least is distributed to the exporters.

In detail, Europe consumes coffee the most at 41 %. This is closely followed by the USA at 39 % which is more than three times than that which is recorded for the all other countries combined at 12 %. Meanwhile, Japan is the least consumer of coffee at 8 %.

However, South Africa leads in coffee production with 44 % while half the figure is noted for Indonesia. Japan and Vietnam make coffee the least at 18 % and 16 %, respectively.

In terms of profit share, 51 % of all profit is distributed to delivery. Half of its figure is accounted to Retailers at 24 % while producers receives 15 %. Exactly 10 % of the totality of the revenues is allocated to exporters which is five times less than that for delivery.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...five times less than that for delivery.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88442211055 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76725262216 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542713567839 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3598365118 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176779939775 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764174877938 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622739528579 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108641347508 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634356316892 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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