The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts beneath explain proportion dissimilar type of energy production of France in one decade. The data are shown in percentage. Overall it can be seen that the biggest percentage in 1995 was other while 2005 was petro

Since 1995 until 2005, the first biggest energy production of France showed was other increase from 4.90% to 9.10% futher more, nuclear rose from 6.40% to 10.10% followed by, gas went up from 29.63% to 30.93% and the lowest was petro fell from 29.27% to 19.55%

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncrease from 4.90% to 9.10% futher more, nuclear rose from 6.40% to 10.10% follow...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r rose from 6.40% to 10.10% followed by, gas went up from 29.63% to 30.93% and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 410.0 965.302439024 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 85.0 196.424390244 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.03637027671 3.73543355544 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19574927505 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 106.607317073 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717647058824 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 110.7 283.868780488 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.200893995 43.030603864 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143469414839 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110279103343 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112994667371 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118409335508 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378488931296 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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