The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island according to a survey of visitors

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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The pie charts illustrate the four main drawbacks and four benefits of Fairmont Island based on opinions of tourists. From a glance it can be see that those visitors overwhelmingly liked the island's residents the most while disliking the high cost of living more than other negatives.
First, the drawbacks. As mentioned, the most off-putting thing for visitors was the expensive of staying on the island, which was cited by 45% or respondents in the survey. This was followed by recreation, which was found to be lacking by ten percent fewer tourists, at 30%. The final two failings were the climate and the local cuisine, cited by 20% and 5% of respondents respectively.
Second, the benefits, of which there are four. Visitors seemed to enjoy the local people the most, and in fact 40% of tourists cited them as a high point in their visit. This way closely followed by the scenery, chosen by 37% of travel.
Finally we have the culture and living arrangements, the former standing at 12% and the letter at 11%. It is interesting to note that the local resident's were mentioned as a plus for the island at just under four times the rate that accommodation was mentioned (40% to 11%).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, while, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76699029126 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69108981082 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2754654156 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149899896333 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479074842695 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621267470227 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875981953825 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641238114955 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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