The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Online retail sales in New Zealand - 2003 and 2013
The two pie charts gives the information about online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand of two different years 2003 and 2013. There were four main areas of online shopping which showed changes in their sales production over a decade.
Overall, sales in travel sector was highest among all other categories. However, after a ten year period the film/music contributed greater percentage to online retailers.
In 2003, travel sector had highest sales of online retailers with 36 percentage. On the other hand, entertainment i.e., film/music and clothes presented almost same proportion of sales to online shopping with 21 and 24 percentages respectively. The less sales were made in stationary or books of about only 19 percent. People were most spent on travelling in this particular year.
Whereas, in 2013 entertainment field was on the top in sales with 33%. In contrast, the sales of online shopping with books increased from 19 to 22 percent. The sales in travels dipped to 29 percentage from 36 in 2003. Likewise, the sales with online shopping clothes also decreased from 24 to 16 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
... retailers. In 2003, travel sector had highest sales of online retailers with 36 perce...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun sales is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...21 and 24 percentages respectively. The less sales were made in stationary or books ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ravelling in this particular year. Whereas, in 2013 entertainment field was on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17127071823 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73514702943 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2245853502 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223275112253 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887633096421 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877332959404 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152733871914 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105246565658 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.