The given pie charts compare the sale data for online retail business in four different sectors mainly books, clothes, film/music and travel in New Zealand for the years 2003 and 2013.
As is seen from the given illustration , over a period of 10 years, there is a surge in the sale of books and film/music, while clothes and travel witnessed a sharp decline in its online sale.
Getting back to details, it is evident from the given data that section of books accounted for almost 22% of the total sales in 2013, which was higher by 3% as compared to its sale percentage in 2003. Similarly, a significant rise of almost 12% was seen in demand of film/music sector in 2013 as against only 21% sales in 2003.
In contrast, sales in travel sector fell dramatically by 7% in 2013 from a value of 36% in 2003. In addition, online clothes sale dipped to only 16%, a drop down by 6% as compared to its value in 2003.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47023809524 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42462074494 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2267921035 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271921283699 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150538507796 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964090253806 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184055855246 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107096525001 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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