The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day

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The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

The given maps compare the renovations that have taken place in the town of Denham over a period of 34 years from 1986 to the present day.

Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the town has undergone numerous changes resulting in better infrastructure, improved facilities, and expanded layout. However, a small post office to the west of the driveway and a bridge over the river stoke remained unaltered.

The striking feature of the given illustration is the dominance of agricultural land. In 1986, the maximum proportion of the layout was covered by the farmland, which was spread out towards the east and west side of the driveway. After that to accommodate the increased population, the present era can witness a surge in the housing units at the extended roads through the driveway replacing the farmlands and the shops as well. Now there are neither shops nor farmlands left, although the post office is still there.

Moreover, to the east of the bridge, removal of the pathway connecting the river to the gardens has led to the expansion of the old primary school. In addition, the gardens, including the large house have been knocked down to create a spacious retirement home with few planted trees. The connecting edge of the extended roadside to the retirement home is surrounded by new residential units to the south of the primary school.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, still, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99568965517 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72145969938 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581896551724 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4047961773 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165496732823 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548236972046 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105410519482 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121027467487 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136657894962 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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