The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
The given pie charts illustrate information about online sales for 4 different retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 and it is measured in percentage of sales. Overall, it can be seen that there was significant change in sales at the given time periods.
First of all, sales in travel sector was in a great extent comparing other sectors in 2003 and it was 36%. Thus, it saw decreasing in 2003 and stayed in second place. Furthermore, proportion of film and music increase considerably and it altered from 21% to 33%. Therefore, that sector was the greatest one in 2013.
Moreover, percentage of sales of books was at least possible amount in 2003, while it was over the trend of clothes in 2013. The trend of clothes diminished from 24% to 16% and in opposite of clothes, online sales of books grew just 3%, from 19% to 22%.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, therefore, thus, while, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52332232494 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3568858216 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325627735875 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132209801286 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151959093727 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220333470939 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122198164146 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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