The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts reveals the use of water for particular need in various six areas of the world.the scale is in percentage.

Firstly, almost one third of water used in gardening in Europe and it raised to 39% in North America. Moreover approximately half of water used in idustries in same area and domestic use of water was nearly 14% in North America and Europe.

Socondly, More than two third of water used in cultivation in South America and Africa which was 71% and 84% respectively. In addition water used for industries was 10% and 7% in South America and Africa and 9% of water used by family in Africa and it was almost double in South America

Thirdly , private use of water was same in Central Asia and South East Asia which was just 7%. However just 5% of water used in industries in Central Asia and it was 12% in South East Asia . Moreover more then 80% of water used in agriculture in Central Asia and South East Asia which was 88% and 81% respectively.

Overall , the pie chart depict highest amount of water used in agriculture and on the flip site lowest amount of water used in domestic need in evry six area of the World .

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the world.the scale is in percentage. Firstly, almost one third of water used ...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... and it raised to 39% in North America. Moreover approximately half of water used in idu...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... which was 71% and 84% respectively. In addition water used for industries was 10% and 7...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lmost double in South America Thirdly , private use of water was same in Centra...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...l Asia and it was 12% in South East Asia . Moreover more then 80% of water used in...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...sia and it was 12% in South East Asia . Moreover more then 80% of water used in agricult...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... 12% in South East Asia . Moreover more then 80% of water used in agriculture in Cen...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...was 88% and 81% respectively. Overall , the pie chart depict highest amount of ...
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Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'depict the highest'.
Suggestion: depict the highest
...espectively. Overall , the pie chart depict highest amount of water used in agriculture and...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'site the lowest'.
Suggestion: site the lowest
...ter used in agriculture and on the flip site lowest amount of water used in domestic need i...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...estic need in evry six area of the World .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, moreover, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4976076555 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4007647176 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435406698565 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.219518118 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200864914746 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121344466512 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813945018382 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158666342304 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816270783526 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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