The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Chayacp on Thu, 10/17/2019 - 23:32

The six pie charts give information about the proportion of water consumption in six regions of the world.

Overall, the agricultural division is the largest part of many regions except in North America and Europe which the industrial usage is the mainly consumption. By contrast, the domestic usage is the smallest division of water consumption.

In agricultural usage, Central Asia is the biggest consumer which accounts for 88%. It is followed by Africa, South East Asia and South America which are respectively 84%, 81% and 71%. 39% and 32% of North America and Europe respectively, making agricultural division the second important consumption.

Next, the industrial usage is the mainly division in North America and Europe which are 48% and 53% respectively. South America and South East Asia are similar proportion around at 10%. Moreover, the industrial division in Africa and Central Asia are 7% and 5% respectively.

The household usage is the smallest division in North America, Europe and South East Asia which are 13%, 15% and 7% respectively. In South America, Africa and Central Asia are the second last which account for 19%, 9% and 7% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... which are 13%, 15% and 7% respectively.In South America, Africa and Central Asia ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45054945055 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11632929453 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434065934066 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3306867144 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.4 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077497903547 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726224854535 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921615250932 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726224854535 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921615250932 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 61.2550243902 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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