The pie charts below show the proportions of visits to Ireland last year by age group, and by gender and type of visit.
The given graphical representation offer a fleet glimpse of the percentage of sojourns to the country of Ireland preceding year by the categories of age and gender as well as the aim of visit.
At the onset, it is precise that a myriad number of individuals inclined to prefer travelling for the purpose of reposing whereas full-fledged adults principally opt for voyaging to Ireland in relation to other age groups.
According to the first pie chart, people aged 25 to 54 account for a bigger share of visits to Ireland making up 23 % and 19% separately. Followed by senior denizens who are 55 to 64 years old, comprised 11%. By the comparison, youngsters who are in 16 to 24 years old and 66 and plus year olds follow behind, forming a paltry 9%. From infant to 15 year old juveniles contributed to the remaining 6 %.
The second pie chart demonstrates that males pay a visit to Ireland mostly constituting 43% in contradistinction to 40% of females. In stark contrast, proportion of both men and women visits to Ireland for the business purposes account for a smaller share 13 % versus a negligible 4%.
To recap, males basically trip to Ireland, especially engaged busy ones since the majority of business visits is visited by males as compared to females.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...separately. Followed by senior denizens who are 55 to 64 years old, comprised 11%. By t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82488479263 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94260173294 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1121593175 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326646888132 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12529994942 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724840067551 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166717169138 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644326290122 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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