Given are the four pie charts delineating the units of electricity production from desperate sources in Australia and France commencing from 1980 to 2000. It is perceptible that both nation's total production soared exponentially over the period, coal was the main fuel source to generate energy in Australia while the reserve was true for nuclear power in France.
In regard to Australia, 100 units of electricity were produced in 1980, which a half of it was coal. The year 2000 heralded a remarkable escalation of coal with just only 50 units for former and up to 130 units after 20 years. Beside that, the source of natural gas, hydro power and oil at the first time took up half total production then only got 1/4 of total. When it comes to France, less 10 units were created than Australia in 1980, however there was a distinct change from Australia was the presence of nuclear power. The quantities of 1980 generated from natural gas or coal were equal, at 25 units, compared to 20 units produced from oil. Thereafter, in the year 2000, nuclear power became much more popular, which was used to produce 126 out of 180 units in the total production. Strikingly, Oil and Coal are the two fuel sources that still remain unchanged after two decades.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the four pie charts delineating the uni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, still, then, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74770642202 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50146409447 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577981651376 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2076595445 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224633926242 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105037560577 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809040523014 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216881963646 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679328811791 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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