The given two circular charts depict comparative analysis of survey of make and female activities relate to participation in cultural and spare time activities.
Looking form all perspective it is crystal clear that, Boys do more contribution in playing games, whilst girls more inclined towards dancing. However, both gender can be seen similar participation in listening to music .
To commence, girls outstripped boys in the area of reading by 19%. Furthermore, boys spending more time in playing games whether it is basketball, soccer and computer games that considered as 26%, 17% and 34% respectively. Though, virtual game occupies highest position as compared to others .
On the contrast, female has a slight edge, doing more cultural activity like dancing with 27% . What is more, women's participation in following games are followed as in gymnastics 11%, netball 15%and computer games 16%. While, skateboarding and gymnastics played by both individuals with similar proportion which is 11% following this with in listening to music also which also have apparent percentage with 10 % in both sexes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, so, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47368421053 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97390007106 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4323537298 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150190935154 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614780489786 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652661794048 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997775119252 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766461980507 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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