Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
globalisation basically means freely business and trade beyond nations . With inception of it, carries both pros and cons . However ,it also entwined the people of various country in spite ,of losses the identity of natives. I, therefore, opine that it creates better understanding between various culture people which will discussed further.
Firstly, globalization helps in boosts the relationship of different traditional people that leads to help in peace and harmony of society . As a results , many attributes can be sort out such as terrorism and exploitation of immigrants. so it would be beneficial to both the nations . Apart from that , apprehension among authorities tends to escalate the productivity. As due to globalization there is significant increase in import and export that automatically enhance the investment and revenue that should be deployed to facilitate infrastructure and basic amenities to underprivileged community. As a consequence , perception between two nation is extremely advantageous .
further reinforcing factor is , tie-up internationally generate more job opportunity as most of the multi national companies recruit local workers. so, it become especially favorable to the penurious people . Hence, they produce income that usher for their way of living that will ultimately surge. What is more, innumerable organizations ameliorate the regional people by catering them lots of option of copious commodities and they choose from a bulk of materials .
To wrap up, despite of , plethora of merits of globalization their demerits would not be undermined like expensive goods , feeling of disparity regarding their own nation . so , it is on government to make use of it judiciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67315175097 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34286411396 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688715953307 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7923161019 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115519556981 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311765384755 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023823542227 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628524333152 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258301100922 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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