The pie charts below shows the result of a survey of children's activities. The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girl participate.
The two pie charts draw the survey of boys and girls cultural activities.
It is clear from the graph that, most of the boys prefer to playing computer games( 34% participation rate) than taking other activities. Playing basketball is the second most famous leisure activity experienced almost third of male children . However, 17% of the boys like to playing soccer. skateboarding and listening to music are less preferable activity chosen by 11% and 10% of boys. Reading the least famous cultural activity among boys with just 2%.
Moving towards the second pie chart, dancing is the most preferable leisure activity among the girls with 27% of the total. Whereas, reading is select by more than fifth of all girls in comparison to the boys. While, computer games experienced as only 16% in the case of the female children is almost half in comparison to the boys. Further, listening to music is record as similar to the boys and playing netball with only 15%. Similarly, skateboarding popularity among boys, 11% of girls go in for gymnastics.
To sum up, equal quantities of boys and girls listening to music, but a dramatically larger number of girls liked reading. There are also many differences in terms of the children preferred leisure activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of all girls in comparison to the boys. While, computer games experienced as only 16%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04306220096 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70070117712 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531100478469 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4779818946 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0769230769 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249232126606 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952031025817 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910477298408 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187381782835 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891799917458 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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