The pie charts show the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in an typical week.
Summarize the information by selecting a reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate sources of information which Germans and Nigerians initially get their news from during a normal 7-day period of time. It should be noted figures for Nigerians rural areas are not mentioned.
A first glance at the charts reveal that Nigerians tend to rely on television to approach news in the first place, meanwhile, in Germany, conventional way using newspapers is predominant.
Looking at the details, the majority of Nigerians (63%) uses televised programs as the initial source of news, which is more than twice as much as the German statistic of this sector. Unlike in Nigeria, Germans are in favor of the printed materials the most with just under half of the population takes advantage of these. Citizens from Nigeria, however, do not have much reliance on this method.
With regard to the unlisted first places to get access to the news, they account for approximately one fourth of the news readers in both nations. Whilst German figures are generally equally distributed, which includes 10% for radio and 11% for using the Internet, Nigerians have nearly no interest in the websites, leaving the use of radio to take a significant proportion of more than one fifth.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-08-27 | LEQUANGTHANG | 76 | view |
- Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region Other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life Discuss both these views and give your own opin 89
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- The pie charts show the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in an typical week Summarize the information by selecting a reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 76
- In many country around the world life expectancy is increasing Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t their news from during a normal 7-day period of time. It should be noted figures for Nigeria...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, while, with regard to, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07035175879 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66373373049 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6051931028 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173344517959 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750763417059 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561559973859 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112063954697 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356569450715 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.