The plan below show the layout of a university's sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment.
summaries, the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The both plans in combination reveals, the structural layout of sports center of university, which shows the recent layout of building and future plan of renovating of club.
Overall, as shown in the plan, the center of the building remains the same, whereas, many changes can be seen in future in east and west side of building.
To begin with, in center of building 25m of swimming pool remain same in future layout as well. Similarly, reception, changing room, seating and gym hall also will be at same place in both plan but gym section will be bit bigger in future plan. Furthermore, we can see lot of changes in east side of building in future plan. Recently, only outdoor court facility is provided, however in new building outdoor court will be replace by sports hall and new two dancing studio will be added. A new changing room for sports person and dance class will be added and café service will also be there for relaxation.
Moreover, in the west side of building, on new leisure pool will be added and separate changing room for them. Besides this, we can purchase all types of sports equipment in sports shop, which lies in the left side of reception, near to new changing room. The new building are in the planning to provide all facilities inside the building.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...mming pool remain same in future layout also. Similarly, reception, changing room, s...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ilding outdoor court will be replace by sports hall and new two dancing studio will be...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...lace by sports hall and new two dancing studio will be added. A new changing room for ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...also be there for relaxation. Moreover, in the west side of building, on new lei...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69777777778 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3817163642 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4013888591 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136523024652 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668396343441 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447799675383 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102823377907 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562239797735 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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