Should government spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Many people claim that, every country should allocate sufficient amount of their budget in reconstructing roads and freeways. Whereas, other people argue that, government should spend more money on improving public vehicles. This essay will examine the arguments for and against the both opinions.
First and foremost, by improving the situation of roads and highway help to reduce the road accidents. We cannot deny that the conditions of roads are the main causes of road accidents and we can lessen this types of accidents by investing sufficient amount of budget in this sector. For intense, the date revealed by Nepal government shows that, over 50% of road accidents was caused by road condition of the country. However, the condition of public transport are also the reason behind the road accidents, hence, the government also implement the rules strictly on public vehicles like, vehicles with limited life are consider as good condition of it and environmental friendly transport service
Secondly, there are many other beneficial parts of improving condition of roads rather than vehicles. It is also the main indicator of infrastructure development of country and helps to connect with rural area, whereas, this connection can be main reason of development of each part of country. Furthermore, it also encourages the small business of rural area and can provide big market and trademark of local product of different sectors. For example, due to the worst road condition of Jumla, the local product, like apple of Jumla are becoming wastage due to lack of market, but huge amount of apple are importing every year from other country like India, hence, people are also buying Indian product rather than own country due of price differences.
To conclude, for the development of nation, improvement on both sector are equally important, both are considered as the main cause of road accidents and government should allocate their budget in this sectors as per the priorities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24451410658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69594421945 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507836990596 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.415518714 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230679025188 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100160467441 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110554303897 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155466035051 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081626711519 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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