The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

A couple of maps offer how the layout of a sport centre in university change in the future after replicating.

Overall, the most significant change will be the presence of more new places leading to a sport layout. By contrast, two outdoor courts will not work in the future being demolished.

Looking at the map for more details, while do 3 areas called a 25m pool, a seating and a changing room maintain, there has more new wonderfully places. To the East of the 25m pool, next to the seating, a hall for sport activities will be developed. In addition, there will have 2 studios for students desiring to dance. Furthermore, a future gym room will be twice as large as the old one.

Especially, what makes a future centre different from old one is both cafe and sports shop respectively in the right and left turn when you immediately enter the centre. Apart from maintaining an old changing room, the centre will have 2 more same places for students. Finally, a new pool will be opened in leisure time that is bigger than another. It will be took place in the left side to the West of the 25m pool.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...presence of more new places leading to a sport layout. Looking at the map for...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50877192982 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.522536159 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5072345194 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149559154384 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068140321622 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512515600037 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111501094072 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499731018586 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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