The pictures demonstrate a number of changes in a health center between 2005 and present day
Overall, It is clear that the health center has been completely transformed after the construction of several facilities
In 2005, the doorway located at the bottom of the centre. From east to west, there are 2 consulting room while the west side there are a third consultig room and an office for employee. In the middle of these, there was a reception desk where people can register or arrange an appointment. The physiotherapy room located to the north of the center. Moreover, outside of health centre , there was a small car parking for no more than 12 cars.
As can be seen from the second picture, in present day, the entrance now relocate on the bottom left-hand of the centre. Reception desk is remove from previous place and now can be access via children's place zone near the doorway. This centre witness an increase in the number of consulting room to 4 which can be seen from south to east. The physiotherapy room is still locate at the same place but there now a minor operations room next to it. In addition, an office is slightly expand . Finally, outside the center, a car parking wider its space to over 30 to meet the increase demand
- Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005 Plan B shows the same place in the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant 58
- The table shows percentage of students giving good rating for different aspects of a university in China in 2000 2005 2010 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cilities In 2005, the doorway located at the bottom of the centre. From east t...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nter. Moreover, outside of health centre , there was a small car parking for no mo...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'located'.
Suggestion: located
...o east. The physiotherapy room is still locate at the same place but there now a minor...
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Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'operation'?
Suggestion: operation
...at the same place but there now a minor operations room next to it. In addition, an office...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
... it. In addition, an office is slightly expand . Finally, outside the center, a car pa...
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Line 7, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n addition, an office is slightly expand . Finally, outside the center, a car park...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, moreover, second, so, still, third, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6742081448 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56605705246 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4394399015 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101603896578 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352015522535 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345455884402 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739628671187 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435467041711 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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