The plans below show the layout of a university’s sport center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The given plants illustrate the primary plan and next plan of a university’s sport center which is supposed to redevelop. An overall view indicates that some significant changes would be applied.
The main change is contributed to construction of a leisure pool which will be built on the left outdoor courts. Also, the right outdoor courts will be replaced by two Dance studios and a sport hall.
As can be seen, the main parts of old sport center, such as 25m pool, Gym, changing room and setting will remained without any change, however in new plan, there are some new sections. In future sport center, there would be three changing rooms which two of them are located at the right and left corners. Also, in new building there would be a sport shop and a café, which are located next to the left and right changing rooms, respectively.
It is noteworthy that the size of Gym would expand in comparison with the old one. In fact, in new plan, more area is allocated to this section.
To summarize, it seems that some fundamental development would be happen in new sport center
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...trate the primary plan and next plan of a university's sport center which is...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...ol, Gym, changing room and setting will remained without any change, however in new plan...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd right changing rooms, respectively. It is noteworthy that the size of Gym wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75392670157 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5889615611 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5631306452 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16497122596 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742083314334 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070690612183 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100097857613 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513932628597 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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