You will be going to out of town soon. Your friend will stay at your home in your absence. Write a letter to your friend and say
- When and where are you going?
- Given some instruction related to the use of home equipment.
- Suggest some local attraction and places to visit.
Hope you are doing well, and being ready to come over to my place. I am writing to provide you some details and also some suggestions to use your time here properly.
As you know, I am going to attend a workshop which is taking place in Isfehan for a week starting from 25.June till 02.July. It is a practical workshop that would be very beneficial for my future career.
My house is ready for hospitality of you and I hope you have a great time at my home. As a small recommendation, please be informed that washing machine is broken and it has a leakage. I called the after sale service to send a technician before my trip but apparently, they did not have time.
Another thing that you should take into account, is my coffee-maker. The turn-on/off bottom has broken and you need to push it strongly.
By the way, I have some suggestions for you about those sight-seeing place in my area that you can visit during this week. There is a well-known Chinese restaurant just at the end of the street and you can reach there by 5 minutes walking. Apart from that, there are many traditional restaurants as well as fast foods near my house. I strongly recommend you to visit the art museum that is located in the cultural center of our region. Another place that I advice you is our amusement park which is famous because of its air-train.
Hope this information would be of assistance and you have a great time at my place.
Take care and enjoy it.
Best wishes,
Yalda Asgari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: June
... in Isfehan for a week starting from 25.June till 02.July. It is a practical worksho...
^^^^
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: July
...or a week starting from 25.June till 02.July. It is a practical workshop that would ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
...ter of our region. Another place that I advice you is our amusement park which is famo...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...region. Another place that I advice you is our amusement park which is famous beca...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, so, well, another thing, apart from, you know, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49815498155 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56828158794 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1399124249 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7058823529 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207490752227 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642654139398 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677428043302 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100984507939 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785895841163 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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