The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps illustrate some changes in the structure of a university's sports centre before and after redeveloped.
Overall, the largest change in the sports centre is the replacement of the both outdoor courts into various facilities on the edges of the university.
At present, this centre has a large building in the middle and two outdoors courts to the west and east. Inside the building , there is a reception facing the entrance, a 25m pool is behind the reception and the gym at the back. On the east of the pool, there is a seating area and on the west of the pool is the changing room.
In the future, apart from the widen of the gym and the destruction of outdoor courts, on the right of the entrance, the café will be built and next to it is the changing room. In the same direction, after renovated, the sports hall will be merged with the seating area. In addition, two dance studios will be add nearby the sports hall. From the west of the entrance, the sports shop will be arranged next to the third changing room.Remarkably, the leisure pool will be built on the original sit of the west outdoor courts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h outdoor courts into various facilities on the edges of the university. ...
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...of the pool is the changing room. In the future, apart from the widen of t...
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...l will be merged with the seating area. In addition, two dance studios will be add...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
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...o dance studios will be add nearby the sports hall. From the west of the entrance, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52875903333 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5088466931 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109015146979 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535241720434 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425276895189 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752956753985 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443634176342 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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