The given plan illustrate the current map of university’s sport center and the future map of sport centre.
Overall, it is evident that the current outdoor courts at the east direction will be replaced by many new facilities. Moreover, the west side outdoor courts will be also changed to the pool.
First of all, the present gym which is at the north side will be expanded in the future plans. The east side outdoor courts of present will be renovated to new sports hall and will add other two dance rooms at the east direction. Moreover, on the south east of future plans will have new clothe room and cafe.
In addition, the university sport centre will change the current outdoor courts which located at west side of map to leisure pool. Furthermore, at the south of the new pool will construct changing room and new sport shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rts of present will be renovated to new sports hall and will add other two dance rooms...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...truct changing room and new sport shop.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77702702703 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43291098896 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493243243243 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6098212626 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.375 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14794932967 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798009936115 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347232010535 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106060923345 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033894881457 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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