the plans below show the layout of a university sports center now and how it will be look after redevelopment
Given is a map concerning summary of information about fitness center before and after reconstruction
It is pervasive from the information supplied the plot will be expanded. Although the new design proposal involves making a number of changes, there are no plans to change some part of it such as entrance.
The most noticeable changes from the existing to the proposed plan is that there will no longer be out door courts. With no outdoor courts, the proposed center will also contain the leisure pool and two dance studios. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by figure is that there exist only one changing room now while fitness center will have three changing room in future; apart from prior changing room two rooms , each of them in the bottom of the corner of plan, will be added. Further gym is going to be bigger and the plan will include sport hall too. Finally, café and sport shop are going to construct. Sport shop will be located in the left side of entrance , and café will be placed in the right side of it.
As map shown, despite of being some additional feature in future, the location of pool , reception , seating and changing room will remain unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...panded. Although the new design proposal involves making a number of changes, th...
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...though the new design proposal involves making a number of changes, there are no...
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...nteresting fact highlighted by figure is that there exist only one changing room ...
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... that there exist only one changing room now while fitness center will have three...
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Suggestion: in the future
...ss center will have three changing room in future; apart from prior changing room two roo...
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...apart from prior changing room two rooms , each of them in the bottom of the corne...
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... be located in the left side of entrance , and café will be placed in the right si...
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Suggestion: in the future
...espite of being some additional feature in future, the location of pool , reception , sea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80975609756 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47815482668 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1630082668 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251600579282 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109987621061 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505464712622 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124181758111 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704668494089 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.