The two diagrams compare the plan in the sports centre of university after reconstruction.
It can be clearly seen that outdoor courts will be dismantled and the sports centre will expand more westerly and easterly. Overall, the present facilities will not change except the gym room will see a growing.
Look precisely to the current map, reception is built at the entrance as well as there is a changing room on the left-hand door and the user is available to get in the 25 meters swimming pool via the door inside the changing room. Also, seating post on the right-hand door as well as Gym room places on the north of the building. As far as outdoor courts, which set on both sides of the centre.
In future design, sports shop and cafe would open after entering the entrance and turn left or right. The amount of changing room would be triple, in addition to the original, the others will plan on the corner independently. Moreover, leisure pool is possible in the future as well as established on the west, furthermore, there will be a sports hall next to the seating. Lastly, on the east, there will be two dance studios.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... the west, furthermore, there will be a sports hall next to the seating. Lastly, on th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...east, there will be two dance studios.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, lastly, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65671641791 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53174689357 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4663038376 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138435136746 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617441551901 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589059359323 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109538261237 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711126460259 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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