The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the transformation of Grange Park from 1920 to the present.
Overall, it is evident that the park witnesses radical changes where some facilities were replaced by more advanced ones.
Looking into details, the fountain in the centre of the park was removed to give way to a rose garden which was surrounded by four seats. However, there is a remaining rose garden located in the top-right left hand corner of the park. Similarly, the two entrances are still unchanged today.
Furthermore, the stage for musicians in the left-hand corner was renovated as an amphitheater for concerts. In the present, there is a children’s playground area in the top right-hand corner which used to be a pond for water plants. Besides, the rose garden next to the pond was converted into a café. The glasshouse near the south entrance has been affected and now it is transformed into a water feature. Finally, the park has witnessed a construction of a new entrance underground car park, replacing the southeast seats.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a children'?
Suggestion: there are a children
...hitheater for concerts. In the present, there is a children’s playground area in the top right-hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, however, look, similarly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88862844199 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619883040936 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0417651135 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117662540766 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499967116306 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478747825127 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873314564624 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267197978849 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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