The plans below show the site of an airport now and how i will look after redevelopment next year

Essay topics:

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how i will look after redevelopment next year.

The diagram gives the information about which site of airport now. And how it took ater the redevlopt in next year
Overall, it can be manifested that there was a many changes after the devlopment there will be many gates increased. And near by passport control customs open the a.t.m. and car hire
First of all, now airport is there are 8 gates but after redevlopment 10 will be made. And neae by gates walk way is cut down but after devlopment make a sky train. However, now airport is not make a shops but after the devlopment made by shops near the security passport control now and after devlopment same for the depatures and arrivals.
Secondly, near the shops security passport control and passport control customs was the same place. But, near the security passport control is checking centre now and after devlop manufactor a bag drop oposite side. And cafe is alomost opposite side. Moreover, passport control customs after devlopment made by cafe, a.t.m., and car hire.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...there will be many gates increased. And near by passport control customs open the a.t.m...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...but after redevlopment 10 will be made. And neae by gates walk way is cut down but ...
^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r devlopment make a sky train. However, now airport is not make a shops but afte...
^^
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a shop' or simply 'shops'?
Suggestion: a shop; shops
...ain. However, now airport is not make a shops but after the devlopment made by shops ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
...tures and arrivals. Secondly, near the shops security passport control and passport ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rity passport control is checking centre now and after devlop manufactor a bag dr...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82840236686 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41267790439 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520710059172 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7305581708 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185554240462 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838067309518 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625691034577 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13610401741 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090414405338 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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