The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

The given graphs depict the site of an airport and how it will be after the renovation next year. Overall, it can be seen that more gates are introduced with a sky train to access those gates. In addition, new facilities are going to be built such as an ATM, a car hire place, and a bag drop.

To begin with, now, the arrivals space has no amenities; however, in the future plan, it is planned that a cafe, an ATM, and a place for hiring cars will be constructed. The departures area has a check-in counter and a cafe, while next year along with these current facilities, a bag drop is going to be there.

Moreover, the security passport control and passport control customs will remain in the same places without any changes. In contrast, the area that link those services with the gates is empty now, but next year there will be shops. In the current plan there are only eight gates that can be accessed by a walkway whereas the next year plan has eighteen gates and a sky train is going to introduced in order to get the gates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accessing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: accessing
...e gates are introduced with a sky train to access those gates. In addition, new facilitie...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...or hiring cars will be constructed. The departures area has a check-in counter and a cafe,...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'introduce'
Suggestion: introduce
...hteen gates and a sky train is going to introduced in order to get the gates.
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37305699482 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27258634938 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0328425936 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262244191261 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126983705838 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126638364783 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184910909642 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251932903571 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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