The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Picture address file C Users Pc Downloads the pla

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Picture address: file:///C:/Users/Pc/Downloads/the-plans-below-show-the-site-of-an-airport.webp

The two images show a comparison between an airport's current state and its renovated appearance in the coming year. Broadly speaking, the future airport will be more advanced, providing numerous additional amenities for customers such as sky train transportation, more boarding gates, and cutting-edge facilities to enhance service quality.
As shown in the pictures, the departures and arrivals areas will remain in the same position, with several entrances being added next year. Additionally, the coffee shop and check-in place will be changed to include a bag drop area, which will be located on the West side. Once past the security and passport control, customers will have the opportunity to purchase items from new shops set to open in the future. Especially, clients will no longer have to walk to their boarding gates on a walkway with only one corridor, as the sky train transportation will be altered, offering two branching corridors at the same time. This means that customers will be able to take the sky train instead of walking to the boarding gates, which also will be added up to 18 in next year compared to merely 8 gates at present
Regarding the arrivals area, several new amenities will be put in, including a café and an ATM, which will be constructed in the Eastern direction. Currently, no facilities are available in this area. Moreover, a new car rental place will be built right next to the arrivals entrance, enabling customers to hire a car to reach their destination after arriving.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an airport' or simply 'airports'?
Suggestion: an airport; airports
...he two images show a comparison between an airports current state and its renovated appeara...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...erely 8 gates at present Regarding the arrivals area, several new amenities will be put...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, broadly speaking, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77744896013 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4198926982 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114893794064 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541707479791 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385913900959 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860848118413 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139187352685 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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