The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two maps depicting the development of the Southwest Airport through a year.
It is evident that there is a big change in the size of the Airport and more services are built inside.
First of all, at the front of the Airport, two more main gates will be built while there are only two main gates to date). In the departures, the coffee shop is relocated from the top right corner to the downside corner. Moreover, the check-in is moved to the old position of the coffee to make room for the bag drop. Move to the arrivals, in the past, this was a plank space while in the future, a new coffee shop is built on the top right corner, a new ATM is constructed on the downside of the coffee shop. Furthermore, the bottom right corner is enlarged for new car hire.
At the back of the Airport, a room that has 8 gates for customers to get on the airplane is planned to be rebuilt to a Y shape. There was a walkway which is going to be replaced by a new sky train for the convenience of the customer. There are 8 gates at present but in the future 10 more gates will be erected to adapt to the increasing number of customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18264840183 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35044969073 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488584474886 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8504317082 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756354019689 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032302735967 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324217090367 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505145655844 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014553361204 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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