The given plans present 2 types of student room which one is for 2 people and one is for 1 person with sufficient facilities and different fees at an Australian university.
Coming to the student room for 2 people, which costs $350 per week, the room is 6 meters long and 4 meters wide. There are 2 chairs, a table placing on the left side of the room, next to the table are two cupboards which separate two beds with two study desk. There are a TV and a small bookshelf respectively in the left hand of study desk 2 and study desk 1. In the left corner of the room, a bathroom is constructed on the left side of the entrance door while a sink, a stove and a microwave are in the right direction.
Turning to the student room for one person, which covers a permission fee of 200 dollars per week, this room is more narrowed compared to the first one. Both 2 two rooms are 6 meters in length but the former room is 4 meters in width while this room is 2,5 meters only. The facilities in this room are quite similar exclude the table and chairs, a bookshelf, a bathroom, a television, a bed companied with a study desk and the cupboard because this is a single room.
Overall, the two rooms are designed for different demands of different type of students with an appropriate fee level for particular facilities the university provides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'desk' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'desks'.
Suggestion: desks
... which separate two beds with two study desk. There are a TV and a small bookshelf r...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'TVs'?
Suggestion: TVs
...o beds with two study desk. There are a TV and a small bookshelf respectively in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3734939759 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53646810046 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469879518072 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.2352912919 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463376456711 0.215688989381 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204643926318 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147200045267 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330308591982 0.15604864568 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10300436441 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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