The plans show an office in a university in 2005 and the same office now

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The plans show an office in a university in 2005 and the same office now.

The plans depict the modifications made to the layout of a university’s office between 2005 and the present day.

Overall, the place has witnessed significant changes, prominent of which is the openness of the main room as well as the accommodation of new facilities. Nevertheless, the room in the northwestern part of the office has stayed unchanged throughout the years.

As per the diagram, the northeastern room and the rectangular-shaped one in the southwestern part of the workplace have been demolished to create a more open working space for employees. Additionally, the remaining desks and chairs in those aforementioned rooms have been assembled and resituated at the back of the office directly facing the door.

In addition, the armchairs have also been relocated to the area adjacent to the water cooler and the coffee machine, and there have been installations of a new sofa and a table. Noticeably, however, the filing cabinets and the photocopier on the right-hand side of workers coming in from the entrance have been left untouched throughout the period. Last but not least, the notice board flanking the mentioned cabinets has been moved next to the remaining room of the office.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fice between 2005 and the present day. Overall, the place has witnessed signifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1768227049 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574358974359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6781711411 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.875 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116695397603 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063160443294 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101507155384 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106636628807 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118248005103 0.0819641961636 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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