The process below shows how chocolate is produced.
The given diagram demonstrates the procedure for principal steps involved in the production of chocolate. It is obvious that there are 10 distinct stages in the process of producing chocolate, commencing with cacao trees being grown in three different areas and culminating in the creation of liquid chocolate.
Looking at the chocolate making in detail, cacao trees first need to be grown in South America, the continent of Africa and Indonesia with a view to collecting ripe red pods. Once the pods are harvested, white cocoa beans are separated to be ready for gathering. Upon the fermentation of the cocoa beans, they are spread in a tray to be exposed to intense sunlight for dying. Following that, the dried beans are packed in large sacks.
At two next phases, the packages are delivered by train or lorry to the factory where the beans are engaged in further processing. Subsequently, the beans are roasted under the highest temperature, around 350 Celsius degrees. After that, the beans are crushed into small pieces with the assistance of a designated machine in an attempt to remove outer shells. Finally, the inner parts are pressed, leading to the production of liquid chocolate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10152284264 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71355764427 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7119886843 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0318180880955 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00930421740757 0.103423049105 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0186084348151 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0210224990721 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153468439653 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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