The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows the process of making dough for a pizza, which includes several steps and complex machinery.

Firstly, the making of dough begins when material such as 4 cups flour, 325 grams of water, two teaspoons of salt, and 1/2 tsp of dry active yeast is put in the large stand mixer. Next, all material is mixed for two minutes slowly by mix machine. After two minutes, the machine should be moved faster for five minutes than before. And then, again it moves slowly for the last two minutes.

When the machine was stopped, which means the mixed material was ready for to next stage. Now that the mixing machine forms the material into the dough, and this dough had the double size for 2 hours later. And the worker who makes a pizza eliminates all air bubbles in this dough by hand. Lastly, this dough is cut in three pieces fairly (approximately 275grams, each). Now, workers will use these pieces when they make a pizza.

Overall, it is clear that making dough includes steps that involve heavy machinery and substantial

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70879120879 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11455670969 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9552664498 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225388108915 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934768930425 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734506315745 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162317491058 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753617199646 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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