The diagram shows the process of making dough for a pizza, which includes several steps and complex machinery.
Firstly, the making of dough begins when a lot of material such as the 4 cups flour, 325 grams water, two tea spoon of salt, and 1/2 tsp of dry active yeast put in the large stand mixer. Next, all material mixed for two minutes slowley by mix machine. After the two minutes, the machine should started faster for five minutes than before. And then, again it slowely for the last two minutes.
When the machine was stop, which means the mixed material was ready to next stage. Now that the mix machine forms the flour into dough, and this dough had double size for 2hours later. And worker who make a pizza eliminate all air bubbles in this dough by hand. Lastly, this dough cutted in three pieces fairly(approximately 275grams, each). Now, workers used this pieces when they make a pizza.
Overall, it is clear that making dough includes steps that involve heavy machinery and substentials.
- The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'spoon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'spoons'.
Suggestion: spoons
... 4 cups flour, 325 grams water, two tea spoon of salt, and 1/2 tsp of dry active yeas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77142857143 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28103807375 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3812762735 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221547383235 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917075626063 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762116398093 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159391017949 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750772277041 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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